Landing Page - is this one a good landing page?

[augustos]

Hello Everyone,

I want to ask about this landing page:

http://www.rpgdicas.com.br/builds/diablo-2/build-necromancer-summoner-diablo-2.html

It's in portuguese-brazil.

What should I improve?

Any tipps will be apreciated

keywords: Build Necromancer Summoner, build necromancer summoner diablo 2, so on...

thanks, everyone.

[mosaicpro]

Haha... I guess you like the different type of answer

[augustos]

WOW...

that's what we can call a GOOD ANSWER.

[mosaicpro]

It's not about being a designer is about keeping a balance.

Look at other websites (good websites) and understand what they make in terms of layout / color / text

No need to be a graphic genius to make your website pleasant.

I spent 5 min on html css for you ... hope it helps

download

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[mosaicpro]

What is the point of a huge page with tons of content if nobody reads it. In my opinion a content is marked as good if people who lands on your page read it.

[augustos]

Thanks for the design advice, but im doing everything by myself and im not a designer so... hehehe but anyway its a good answer for the question

[augustos]

thanks buddy hehhee everybody can say something about the design, layout, video, so on... but about the content im very sure that really unique and good... i get first ladder at US.EAST on Hardcore without die

[mosaicpro]

A good landing page is one that would make you want to read it. I left your page in less than 10 seconds. That means your Bounce rate will be high => Bad Signal for landing page

A good idea is to improve overall look (layout). Make it more attractive.

Just one of the things i spotted.

[firstconversion]

haha, now you're talking! That brings back memories

I would start with a much stronger image above the fold - maybe move the movie section up and start with that - your best stuff is way down the page

The page feels a bit unstructured - maybe you need darker or lighter colour columns outside your content to add the structure